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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 22:12:48 GMT -5
In a world unfair,
All that keeps me there,
Is a heart of rage,
I can't learn too care,
There are no lines to learn,
And in this ignorance,
I learn the bliss,
It cannot miss,
Blind eyes that follow me,
To the grave unseen,
I walk along a path unknown to me,
And in this endless road,
I learn to hate,
More than I even know...
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Post by Shattered Memories on Aug 16, 2005 22:18:00 GMT -5
10/10
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 22:18:35 GMT -5
Your just being nice.
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Post by Shattered Memories on Aug 16, 2005 22:25:00 GMT -5
Nuu.. I'm serious.
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 22:27:13 GMT -5
Yay. Thanks!
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Post by Shattered Memories on Aug 16, 2005 22:39:49 GMT -5
lol ^_^
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 22:40:40 GMT -5
I thought it was kinda sucky, but oh well. It's easy like a sunday morning...lol
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Post by rubylizard on Aug 16, 2005 22:50:18 GMT -5
How sad. Lol. In a good way? It's supposed to be sad? Uh, yes, it is.  7/10.. Lol |
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 22:52:40 GMT -5
It is, kinda, green day sad...lol. It sucked, huh?
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Post by rubylizard on Aug 16, 2005 22:54:05 GMT -5
Of course not. It depends what kind of poems someone's into. I like abstract ones that don't really rhyme so. Lol.
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 16, 2005 23:03:30 GMT -5
lol.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 8:57:59 GMT -5
Hummm... This is a tough one... But... Gack... I don't know. I like it... Though I don't really enjoy teh rhymey typea poems... >>;;
8.42/10
*sticks out tongue*
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Post by ravenspirit on Aug 17, 2005 12:58:57 GMT -5
I like it. Huhmm.. *Turns poem upside down* Erm.. There. Mewah! =3 9/10. It has meaning..
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 18:29:46 GMT -5
Oh yea! It also sounds good if you read it from the bottum up! Haha
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 18:32:25 GMT -5
lol.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 18:37:47 GMT -5
That's cool! I wish I had the specialness to do that! I change my rating! *Erases first rating and scribbles down some squiggley lines*
9.5/10
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 18:46:31 GMT -5
Wait, how?
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 18:47:26 GMT -5
What do you mean?
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 18:50:06 GMT -5
Nvm.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 18:51:56 GMT -5
>>;; Tell me.. I'm confizzled...
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 19:02:07 GMT -5
No, I was thinking wrong, nothing.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 19:06:50 GMT -5
Oh, alright. Okie... Heh.. Silly Kashers!!
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 19:14:50 GMT -5
kie dokie.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 19:27:52 GMT -5
Haha..
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 20:14:19 GMT -5
ki bi dibib di doo...
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 20:17:40 GMT -5
LOLOLOLOL..
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 20:18:54 GMT -5
lol.*huggles.*
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Post by Aimée on Aug 17, 2005 20:19:11 GMT -5
*Huggles back*
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Post by pkomy on Aug 17, 2005 20:20:16 GMT -5
*sniff* aint I in the huggling circle??*sniff*
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 17, 2005 20:21:56 GMT -5
*huggles Komy tightly and cuddles.*
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7/10.. Lol
