greiver
Crackin'
The inevitability of death is merely an incentive to fight harder...Whilst I live[M:0]
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Post by greiver on Aug 27, 2005 17:04:11 GMT -5
I lay awake at night. Staring at the world trying to fill the void. I see you. I run I try to catch up to you I see you growing distant. I yell I scream I do everything to touch you. You dissapear. Starnded in the darkness swallowed by shadows slowly dying. I call to all my friends. I try to tell them To have someone understand What im going through. This world I live in it is hell. I run only to be swallowed by darkness, try to love and and thrown on my face. I stop trying. Im left behind. I catch up and everyone is changed...are they okay? They look down on me, those who I care for I lose them to. All of life is eventually shallowed by darkness..till you are no more.
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 27, 2005 18:51:47 GMT -5
Cool. Creepy in a romantic way....I think...........10/10
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Post by Kakashi on Aug 27, 2005 21:36:44 GMT -5
...300posts.
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Post by Aimée on Aug 27, 2005 23:25:17 GMT -5
Hummmm... 9.99/9.99..... IT'S GREAT! Though it seemed repetative.
By the way, I don't do 10s, 9.99 is the best you can get from me... >>;;
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greiverI cant sign in
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Post by greiverI cant sign in on Sept 6, 2005 20:28:02 GMT -5
hmmm repetitive yes but arent feelings repetitve? these are my true feelings... Well on the bright sideI got Great ratings!
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