Ninamori
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Post by Ninamori on Nov 12, 2005 14:53:12 GMT -5
Among the world of the ordinary no one's life has changed second thoughts, on the contrary mine has been rearanged No one may have cared about the good times and the bad or the times we shared the times we were glad and sad Maybe there's a reason to why this is happen' I can't explain what I can't obtain Only words can express the reason I've been so depressed I wish it wasn't this way and to have you every single day to myself, I would tell you the reason why I've been so blue I can't live without you... I can't love without you... can't surive without you... :'(by my side Tell me if you like it
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Post by Aimée on Nov 12, 2005 16:34:11 GMT -5
That was great!! ^_^
That reminded me of our old friend Misty-sama..
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Post by inuyasha on Nov 13, 2005 6:21:37 GMT -5
that is kool it is like you read my mind lol well i loved it i hope you wright more i give you >'-'< >'-'< >'-'< >'-'< >'-'< 5 out of 5
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Post by Aimée on Nov 13, 2005 11:39:41 GMT -5
Billy... We scale out of 10 here.
I really did like this.. But I'm not fond of the rhyming thing. 9.8 out of 10. ^_^
((© Poster's note: I don't give "10"s. The highest from me is 9.9. If I really like it, but it rhymes, one point will be deducted off ©))
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Ninamori
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Post by Ninamori on Nov 14, 2005 18:41:54 GMT -5
You don't like ryhming I have others
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Post by Aimée on Nov 15, 2005 8:34:11 GMT -5
But I LOVE your poem!! ^____^
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